Sir John Franklin

paragragh #8

2012-02-14T11:54:00.000-08:00

Some of my crew members have scurvey and it is A big challengeto get through this because I only have half of my crew left and I am worried. I think I am gonna die.

paragragh #7

2012-02-14T11:44:00.000-08:00

We have been out on sea for month we are running out of food. We lost 1 quarter of our men. I am getting really scared and worried and and I don't know if i'm gonna make it.

paragragh #6

2012-02-14T11:30:00.000-08:00

Well we have been at see and we hit a terrible thunder storm. A few people have gone missing and a few people dround and a thunder hit the boat and we got stuck on and island fixing it. We will be fixing our boat for a while and i will come home soon, but untill then we are stuck.

2012-02-13T11:59:00.001-08:00

Sir John Franklin’s early years are mostly unknown. Before Franklin joined the British Navy he was a Naval Officer, an Explore, and an Author. Franklin was born in Spilsby, England in 1786. When Franklin joined the British navy October 1800, he was 26 years old. Franklin was a great explorer.

Franklin spent his final years how. He owned two ships the HMS Erebus and the HMS Terror. They both froze in the arctic and that is where he died. After Franklin died the rest of his crew died of lead poising from badly canned food. A couple of years after every one died, their bodies were found on King William’s Island. When they lost their food Franklin ate his own boots.

The challenges at sea were hard to overcome. Some of the challenges at sea were ice and cold weather. Sir John Franklin got along very well with his crew. Franklin’s voyage took 3 years but he only survived 2 years on his voyage. Even though he only lasted 2 years he was still a great explore.

Where did Sir John Franklin go for his voyage? Franklin’s voyage led him to Australia once and the Arctic twice. After he came back from his first voyage to the arctic, he married his first wife before returning to the arctic a second time. Sir John Franklin handpicked 133 crew members and beat the French Navy. Nobody survived this fatal expedition. None of this information relates to the other sentences.

The historical account

2012-02-13T08:20:00.000-08:00

Sir John Franklin’s early years are mostly unknown. Before Franklin joined the British navy he was a Naval Officer, an Explore, and an Author. Franklin was born in Spilsby, England in 1786. When Franklin joined the British navy he was 26 years old in October 1800. Franklin was a great explorer, but he does not have a lot of information written down.

Franklin spent his final years then finally died. He owned two ships the HMS Erebus and the HMS Terror. They both froze in the arctic and that is when he died. After Franklin died the rest of his crew died of lead poising from badly canned food. A couple of years after every one died there bodies were found on King William’s Island. When they lost their food Franklin would eat his own boots.

The challenges at sea were hard to overcome. Some of the challenges at sea were ice and cold weather. Sir John Franklin got along very well with his crew. Franklin’s voyage took 3 years but he only survived 2 years on the voyage. Even though he only lasted 2 years he was still a great explorer.

Where did Sir John Franklin go for his voyage? Franklin went to Australia once and the Arctic twice. After he came back from the arctic once he married his first wife then went back to the arctic a second time.

This information does not fit in to a category so it’s just random stuff. Sir John Franklin handpicked 133 crew members and beat the French navy. He got married in 1822 to his first wife. Nobody survived this fatal expedition. None of this information relates to the other sentences.

Paragragh #5

2012-02-09T11:39:00.000-08:00

I am so excited for the voyage. I am a little scared and a little happy and I still have the butterflies. I am not sick my crews not sick and we are all healthy for the voyage tomorrow. The next day...
I am excited I tell you excited. I just hope my crew isn't sick. Well nobody sick everyone is healthy let go.

Paragragh #4

2012-02-07T11:36:00.000-08:00

Dear John

I am not vary happy that you left me for that dangrous voyage. I think your out of your mind. YOU HERE ME. I bet your not even gonna make it back. Please come back I love you no matter what and if you die, I want you to die next to me. Please come back.

Love Mom

Who should I take?

2012-01-24T19:01:00.000-08:00

I think I will take my crew of 128 men, because they are skilled sailors and with out them we won't make it through the northern passage.

What will i bring?

2012-01-24T11:58:00.000-08:00

When I go on my voyage I will bring, fruits and vegtables, clean drinking water, and a fishing rod so i don't have to eat my boots. We will also need to bring lots of clothing and warm blankets because crossing the Arctic will be very cold.

Whats out there?

2012-01-16T11:59:00.000-08:00

I was just in a small town and I said to myself " This is boring " So I decided to start exploring in a boat. I went side to side too and fro . I explored in till I threw up. Then I finaly discoverded the most amazing thing in the world.